halcyon_morn ([info]halcyon_morn) wrote,
@ 2007-09-04 00:04:00
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Entry tags:!fic, character: kangin, character: kibum, character: sungmin, fandom: super junior, rating: explicit content, series: hooker!verse

Challenge
I really love the hookerverse created by [info]sugarless_666 and [info]out_of_words24 , so I'm trying my hand at it. I think I wanted it to be...sexier, or angstier, or something, because the originals are so good, but I think it turned out alright.

Challenge
pairings: Kibum/Sungmin, Kangin/Sungmin

Sungmin has been working the streets for months, maybe years—he no longer knows the date, chooses to forget his birthday, his hometown, the sound of his mother's screams and the creak of the door as his stepfather stumbles into his room in the middle of the night. He has been working long enough to know how to turn sleepless, bloodshot eyes enticing with a trick of the light; long enough to stop caring that his lips are still hot and sticky from the john before; long enough to give the sick fucks whatever they want, as long as the money is right, but never to go with the ones who smile. They only smile if they don't intend to pay.

This one doesn't smile, but Sungmin realizes when he's down on his knees in the alleyway, moaning ever so softly, pretending to gag ever so slightly, that there is something different about him. Different means dangerous, and Sungmin considers walking away but decides against it—not because the man is handsome and gentle, not even because of the money, but because he meets Sungmin's eyes and there is no pity or contempt in his gaze, just cool appraisal. It is a challenge, and Sungmin has not backed down from a challenge since he found his mother bleeding and his stepfather waiting and he ran and ran until he reached his new home on this corner. He draws on all his experience and feels a rush of triumph at the wobble in the man's knees, the rasp in his breath, is sure the man is close when he hears the voice rumble above his head.

"You'll do."

Then the man is zipping up his pants and slipping a card and a wad of cash into his shirt pocket, and by the time Sungmin has managed to stand he is gone. Sungmin's fingers stray automatically to smear the sex from his lips as he reads the card. Kim Kibum, it says. Manager, Pantheon Gentlemen's Club.

***

Sungmin likes Eeteuk immediately because Eeteuk cuts through the bullshit without being remotely businesslike.

"I like you boys who've worked on the street because I don't have to get someone to teach you how to fuck and suck. You have no idea how complicated that can be." The twinkle in Eeteuk's eye and the dimple in his cheek make Sungmin think that before Eeteuk became the house mama, he must've been the highest earner. "Some of you, though, don't seem to know how to kiss."

This is another challenge. Sungmin gives Eeteuk the kiss he gives men who think they can control him, hungry and defiant and completely devastating, and when he pulls away Eeteuk is laughing softly. "I think I know who your first client will be. Maybe you'll have better luck than all these other whores." Eeteuk says the word whores affectionately, and Sungmin can't help but smile. "I'll introduce you two tonight."

"Ah, you came."

Sungmin turns at the sound of the deep voice, sees Kibum already making his way away from them down the hall. "We'll expect you to work hard." The office door shuts brusquely on hard, and Sungmin thinks that Kibum will be his next challenge.

***

Kangin, on the other hand, will be no challenge at all. Sungmin almost laughs when Eeteuk introduces them, can read the entire situation from Kangin's stiff back and furrowed eyebrows and knows immediately how to break him.

Now they are alone in one of the rooms and Kangin is saying, "I'm here for him, not for this, but he won't let me stay unless I buy something, so I'm buying your time. Do whatever you want, take a nap, read a book." Kangin sits down rigidly in one of the chairs. Sungmin starts crying.

He cries softly enough that Kangin doesn't notice at first, and he has to let out a sniff before the other man realizes what's happening. Sungmin can see the battle to keep his eyes steely and voice severe when Kangin says, "What's wrong?"

"I'm sorry, I'm sorry," he almost whispers. "It's just that...I'm new here, and I thought maybe...maybe if someone nice like you were my first, things might not be so bad, but I guess..." He takes a shaky breath. "I'm sorry," he says, then turns away and lowers his head.

He counts three seconds and then feels Kangin's weight come down gingerly beside him on the bed and Kangin's arm wrap awkwardly around his shoulder. In one fluid movement he has folded himself into Kangin, is crying against his chest, and he knows he has won when he feels a hand running soothingly through his hair and a voice whispering, "I'll be alright," in his ear.

When Sungmin finally looks up, he makes sure that the tear streaks on his cheeks glint in the light, that his mouth is open just so, that his eyes are round and liquid. "Thank you," he says, and he sees Kangin's Adam's apple move as he swallows. "I..." he starts, then shakes his head and looks down at his hands.

"No, what?" Kangin asks gently.

"Well...I was just...I know you're here for him, but..." Sungmin blushes prettily. "He taught me how to—" Sungmin blushes more "—so I thought maybe...I could show you, to thank you?" He can see the agony in Kangin's eyes, but he is not surprised when the man nods his consent.

***

Later, when Kangin is fucking him—eyes scrunched shut, long smooth strokes—Sungmin thinks about the things that get him off. Money. Control. Winning. He is thinking about Kibum's eyes when he comes.




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[info]out_of_words24
2007-09-04 04:29 am UTC (link)
oh. my god. you should always write hooker!fic. please. and crafty, sly, manipulative sungmin, and just, i die. over and over and over again, just <3

ilu and this so, so, so much <3 i love how dark it is, how calculated and brittle and just, my hooker!fic is just made up of way too much fluff -dies from the fail-

(also, the place has a name now! awesome)

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-09-04 04:35 am UTC (link)
No, see, cuz iluandyourhooker!ficSOmuch! AndIwantyouguystowritemore! Um, yes. Glad you liked it, though. ♥

(Yeah, I hope that's ok. I just felt like it needed to be on Kibum's card.)

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(no subject) - [info]out_of_words24, 2007-09-04 04:37 am UTC
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[info]sugarless_666
2007-09-04 04:41 am UTC (link)
Omg, you sweetie. ♥ Thank you so much! Best way to start the day. 8D

Eeteuk says the word whores affectionately, and Sungmin can't help but smile.

Randomly, have you seen No Regret? This line really made me think of that movie.


Later, when Kangin is fucking him—eyes scrunched shut, long smooth strokes—Sungmin thinks about the things that get him off. Money. Control. Winning. He is thinking about Kibum's eyes when he comes.


SKAJDSKJDFKSJKFJKS Sungmin, you wonderful, wonderful pretty hor.

Omg, this was amazing. It doesn't need to be angstier or sexier or anything, it's just perfect like this. I love the dry realism and how fucked up Sungmin is, and YOU NAMED THE PLACE!! *throws confetti* I remain pleasantly addicted to your wicked Kibum.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-09-04 04:56 am UTC (link)
Yay! I hope it brightens up your school day. ♥

I have not seen No Regret—should I? I mean, if it includes affectionate use of the word whores, I guess I should...

Fucked-up!Sungmin and wicked!Kibum are like crack to me. I can't even help myself. They make me do crazy things, like name other people's whorehouses. (Which, by the way, you should totally feel free to rename if you don't approve.)

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(no subject) - [info]sugarless_666, 2007-09-04 05:02 am UTC
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(no subject) - [info]sugarless_666, 2007-09-04 07:38 am UTC
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[info]clicheterms
2007-09-04 04:45 am UTC (link)
woah. sungmin's character is manipulative, sly, and devious in all the right ways. i feel myself falling for him already(;♥

<3 tiffo

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-09-04 04:56 am UTC (link)
Ha! By which I mean, yesmetoo. ;-)

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[info]binkikitty
2007-09-04 04:53 am UTC (link)
Oh my fucking god. Just, yes. What the fuck can I say to this except yes and yes and more yes.

Please write more. Continue it. Omg. Please. PLEASE. <333 Sungminnie and this is just dsngskdjgnsgerognoigni ;.; I haven't read a fic in weeks but then I saw this and it was just...you are amazing. MOAR. If you don't continue this, well then...;.; just write moar Min stuff.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-09-04 04:57 am UTC (link)
*laughs* Thank you! I'm totally in love with Sungmin and I actually have another fic with him in the works, so stay tuned. :-)

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(no subject) - [info]binkikitty, 2007-09-04 05:00 am UTC
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[info]jaded_skys
2007-09-04 05:19 am UTC (link)
GUH.

GUH.

YOU. STOP BEING SO MUCH WIN, IT'S KILLING ME.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-09-04 12:56 pm UTC (link)
I have no control over what the Suju hookers make me do. I can make no promises. ;-)

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[info]fading_sun_sock
2007-09-04 05:20 am UTC (link)
Holy crap, this story was absolutely perfect! I mean, you got a manipulative sly Sungminnie to be all shy and submissive and...and...pouty...and your definetion of Eetuek was so sweet! How he calls them whore's but affectionately and--*sighs*. Maybe I should just say that this was wonderful and leave it at that. Because as a result of your writing, I seem unable to string two sentences together and with me that is NEVER a good thing. Because I tend to ramble on when I'm happy and hey look, I guess I'm blabbing now, arent I? It's just that this story is so...good, that I can't even describe it. I loved the Kibum/Sungmin-ee-ness of it. I loved it all. It was just...perfect. *laughs at self* Sorry, I just wanted to say I liked it.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-09-04 12:58 pm UTC (link)
*laughs* Thank you for your babble! I very much approve of free-form comment writing, and I'm glad you liked it!

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[info]tiatza
2007-09-04 07:28 am UTC (link)
Ooooh... hooker!fic!!! All you hooker!verse writers are just so wonderful. And sungmin and kibum! *flails*

Sungmin's fingers stray automatically to smear the sex from his lips as he reads the card

that line is just so... *flails again*

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-09-04 01:02 pm UTC (link)
I know! The hooker!verse! I just had to play.

Um, I like that line too, because I like my Sungmin wanton and debauched. *is shot*

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(no subject) - [info]tiatza, 2007-09-05 07:02 am UTC

[info]suju_ari
2007-09-04 09:10 am UTC (link)
OMG!!!! Sungminnie!!!! O______O

but it is sooooooo hot!!!!

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-09-04 01:02 pm UTC (link)
Sungminisabeautifulwhore. Thatisall.

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-09-04 11:18 am UTC (link)
­­­­This kind of sucks D: I just wanted to write you something with nasty!Kibum and manipulative!Sungmin and I got home pretty early today, so... *shrugs* Epilogue-like-thingy which I hope will prompt more of your awesome? D:





Two can play this game

"Yes, what is it?" Kibum asks, and Sungmin can't quite decide if he's happy about him not looking up from his stack of papers or disappointed instead.

"I need some money, if that's possible," Sungmin says, and then he adds; "For decent clothes," cheeks flushing just so, lips pursed in a perfect smile. Kibum is still writing, humming to himself softly and Sungmin is starting to get annoyed, his performance so clever now spoiled.

After what feels like an eternity, Kibum finally speaks, and what he says is; "You should go to Eeteuk with problems like this," but he looks up at Sungmin, a short glance, finally, and Sungmin keeps himself from cheering out loud at the brief pause in Kibum's fluid writing, at the uncertain quiver of the pen poised above paper as Kibum's gaze runs over Sungmin's body with appraisal. "What do you want?"

"I need some money, as I said," Sungmin replies slyly and Kibum looks at him again, really looks at him, then leans back in his seat with a soft sigh, an eyebrow arched in silent question. Sungmin smiles, just plastic enough to be attractive. "No, actually, I just wanted to thank you."

Kibum runs his tongue over his teeth, contemplating, his smile too wide, too pretty to be anything but fake.

"You already did."

"I want to do it properly," Sungmin insists, trying to keep still as his blood rushes through his veins too fast, too loud in his own ears, because this—this one thing, you never tell a man. Now, though, now might be just the time when playing it safe would compromise the challenge and Sungmin doesn't want that; can't let that happen. "I'll do anything you want me to."

"Really. Anything I want."

Sungmin nods, the motion just eager enough to be pleasing, hair flying in his eyes.

"Anything."

Kibum's smile widens a friction—if that's even possible­­—the rigid line of his shoulders loosening a bit.

"Come here," he says softly and Sungmin walks over, not too fast, not too slow, his hips swaying ever so slightly with his steps.

"Sit on the desk," Kibum commands in the same gentle tone of voice (and Sungmin thinks gentle might isn't the good word for it; it's something darker and thicker, like chocolate and the black of Kibum's eyes).

Sungmin gasps as Kibum leans in and mouths the smooth skin of his hip peeking out between waistband and the hem of his t-shirt, traces the light curve of bone with lips and tongue, all hot breath and aching slowness.

"Take off your shirt," Kibum whispers and Sungmin does, slowly, arching his back, letting the sleek light and shadow of Kibum's office play over his tight stomach, Kibum's eyes heavy on every twitch of his muscles as he runs the palms of his hands over Sungmin's knees, up his thighs, the tips of his fingers caressing denim and the sensitive skin underneath. Sungmin can feel himself grow hard against his zipper, and then Kibum kisses his hip again, and then the other one, and Sungmin thinks he's probably never felt this hot in his life, never wanted anyone as much as he wants Kibum, his cool smile and thick cock and liquid eyes, understated, dangerous beauty.


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[info]sugarless_666
2007-09-04 11:19 am UTC (link)


"And now," Kibum is whispering, hot against Sungmin's stomach and Sungmin isn't sure he knows how he looks anymore­, already lost control over the small whimpers he makes every time Kibum's lips brush his skin, "now be a good boy and get me some coffee."

Sungmin freezes, his whole world coming to what he's sure is an epic halt.

"What?" he gasps, because he couldn't possibly just hear what he thinks he did.

"Black, no sugar," Kibum adds as an afterthought, leaning back in his seat contentedly. "Preferably sometime today."

"I-" Sungmin blinks, closes his mouth. "You're serious."

"Oh, quite," Kibum assures him with a contended smile.

Sungmin wants to be angry, wants to feel ridiculed with his shirt lying discarded on the floor and his cheeks burning with arousal. Sungmin wants to cry, wants to shout, wants to pout and plead until Kibum takes him in his arms and kisses it all better and fucks Sungmin the way Sungmin wants him to, but-

Sungmin smirks, hopping off the table. He leans down for his shirt, pulls it over his head carelessly.

"No sugar."

"Nope."

"As you wish."

Sungmin bows, eyes averted, smile too sharp to be anything but real.




*digs a hole and crawls in it*

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(no subject) - [info]halcyon_morn, 2007-09-04 01:13 pm UTC
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[info]thenummyone
2007-09-04 02:18 pm UTC (link)
*fans self* Damn minnie... Damn lol.

♥ ilu! More please =D This is the most satisfying read I've had in awhile <3

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-09-04 02:40 pm UTC (link)
Yay for hooker!fic! If you haven't already found it, [info]out_of_words24 has already written an excellent continuation of this here, and all of the originals that inspired me are archived here. Enjoy... ;-)

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(no subject) - [info]thenummyone, 2007-09-04 10:30 pm UTC

[info]hoyah
2007-09-04 05:55 pm UTC (link)
xD Wow I like this. Manipulative SungMin and Stiff KangIn (no pun intended) and Oddly Umma-like EeTeuk. ^o^

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-09-04 08:58 pm UTC (link)
Yay! Glad you liked it; I'm just following in the footsteps of you and other hooker!verse writers. (^_^)v

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(no subject) - [info]hoyah, 2007-09-04 09:27 pm UTC

[info]lovelysilver19
2007-09-04 06:42 pm UTC (link)
o.0;;; <3

Gods, the way you people write these damned hooker!fics make me want to try writing some of my own even though I KNOW it's going to suck if I try because they're so good. <3

Damn. Excuse my eloquence. My brain's really out of it.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-09-04 09:00 pm UTC (link)
Hooker!fic is so hot right now. And by "right now," I mean "always and intrinsically." You should try some—there can never be too much!

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[info]nadesico_chan
2007-09-05 05:05 pm UTC (link)
I don't know what is it with hooker!fic these days, but I totally love this trend, and you are all so gifted in writing them!I love this part to death, love the kangin in it^__^

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-09-05 08:56 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! Yeah, it's...kind of become a phenomenon. But, I mean, c'mon—hookers. How could it not be? ;^_^)

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[info]whitefoxbuns
2007-11-30 11:57 pm UTC (link)
geeeeeee...............ssssssssssss...yeah, you just gave me a brain fart hahahaa, i mean a great wonderful orgasmic brain fart, WOW

I HEART HOW SUNGMIN IS SO SLUTTY AND SKILLED, and how HOT AND SEXY i can imagine him doing all that he does to both kibum and kangin

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-12-01 04:36 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! :-) I assume you came to this via some other hooker!fic, but just in case you didn't you can find the whole series here. Thanks for reading!

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[info]blurmeese
2008-01-05 10:06 am UTC (link)
:O :D Even though SuJu isn't my fandom of choice (it takes time to remember which of the 13 boys you were referring to :O *is stupid*) this was amazing. Sungmin really shines in his role and I think you wrote him out amazingly XD *goes off to read more*

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[info]halcyon_morn
2008-01-05 04:02 pm UTC (link)
Watch out—DBSK is totally the gateway drug to the more hardcore crack that is Suju. Soon you'll know all their names and be jonesing for their particular brand of sparkly fail all the time. ;D

I love to write hooker!verse Sungmin, and I love it when new people stumble upon the 'verse. I'm glad you're enjoying!

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[info]snape_freak
2008-08-07 03:59 am UTC (link)
Omg, omg, omg, I need to go hunt down whatever other hooker!fic is out there because this is simply amazing. Another couple I don't like (ok, yeah, so I have a very small group of people I like to see ficced, but what I LOVE is writers like you that can make me like anything) but ugh, this is great. Manipulative Ming FTW.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2008-08-19 01:02 am UTC (link)
Manipulative Ming FTW.

Amen.

By the way, did you find the other hooker!fic? It's all archived here.

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(no subject) - [info]snape_freak, 2008-08-26 04:34 am UTC

[info]dumortierite
2009-05-18 11:43 pm UTC (link)
Oh man I don't really know what to say but yesssssss.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2009-05-19 03:39 pm UTC (link)
XD "yesssssss" will do. Thanks.

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[info]anthropopathy
2009-05-27 06:14 pm UTC (link)
...Loving it. You know I'll be reading all of these now, right.

He is thinking about Kibum's eyes when he comes. - Can think of much worse things to think about at a time like that... XD

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