halcyon_morn ([info]halcyon_morn) wrote,
@ 2007-11-04 09:26:00
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Entry tags:!fic, character: donghae, character: sungmin, character: yesung, fandom: super junior, rating: explicit content, series: hooker!verse

Tit for Tat
Hooker!verse update! This one takes place before [info]tiatza's "My Cup Runneth Over" and [info]out_of_words24's "Rules" to provide background to the plot elements they've introduced and to develop Yesung's character a bit more. (He's ridiculously fun to write.) A good subtitle for this might be, "In which Yesung is a total badass, Sungmin is not Julia Roberts and Donghae is gratuitously abused." (I'm sorry, Donghae; I love you!) Beta by [info]ouimonsieur.

Tit for Tat
pairing: Yesung/Sungmin, implied Hyukjae/Donghae

Yesung almost laughs when he opens the door to find Sungmin leaning casually against the doorframe, wearing worn, low-cut jeans and a threadbare cotton t-shirt and looking up at him with lidded eyes.

Yesung almost laughs, but decides that that would spoil the fun, so instead he frowns. "I told you to wear something nice."

"Oh, I'm sorry," Sungmin says, looking not sorry at all and moving smoothly into the suite. "I just thought maybe you'd want me in something..." He pauses, brings his finger up to play as-if-absently across his lower lip. "...more comfortable."

Yesung deepens his frown. "What if I had asked you here to attend a party with me? What would you have done?"

Sungmin's eyes flash. "Hmm," he says, stepping forward and running his hands over Yesung's chest thoughtfully. "I'd have told you I don't have the red hair or the cunt to play Pretty Woman, but I do have a t-shirt that you can rip off of me and use to tie me up." He leans forward, lips almost touching Yesung's. "I think you'd forget about the gala."

Now Yesung does laugh, a harsh, deep laugh, and Sungmin doesn't miss a beat: his smile in response is lazy and wicked. "You're good. Are the rest of them all as good as you?" Yesung asks. Sungmin raises one eloquent eyebrow in response and Yesung laughs again. "I didn't think so. Here, sit down." He motions to the leather couch and starts towards the minibar. "What do you drink?"

"Nothing, when I'm on the job. Especially not with my boss," Sungmin says, lowering himself onto the couch with studied grace.

"So you did bother to read the whole card, then." Yesung smirks. "If you know I'm your new boss, then you must also know I have no intention of paying you. Why did you come?"

Sungmin's shrug is fluid, feline; his grin is equally catlike. "I've always wanted to get fucked in a penthouse suite."

Now it is Yesung's turn to raise an eyebrow. "And?"

Sungmin's eyes narrow, almost imperceptibly. "You know Kibum-ssi better than anyone else at the club. I'm...curious about him. I thought if you couldn't pay me in cash..."

"That I'd trade secrets for sex?" Yesung laughs again, and Sungmin's brow furrows. "I only barter in kind. Now if you had something useful to tell me..."

"Whores keep each other's secrets," Sungmin says severely, and Yesung is ready to be surprised and disappointed until he continues. "So we can put them to good use at times like this. I'll tell you whatever you want to know about the club."

"It's a deal, then," Yesung says, and starts walking towards the French doors in the back of the room. "Come out to the veranda with me. The view is spectacular, and I can show you how Kibum likes to be fucked while we talk."

***

"Hey, faggot! We saw you kiss your fairy boyfriend goodnight—does that mean you can play with us now?"

Donghae is wiry, strong, hardened from years on the streets before Eeteuk picked him up and brought him to the club, but he knows he has no chance against three men this big, knows there is no way he can make it back to Hyukjae's or to the subway station before they catch him, knows he is in trouble. He manages to keep his panic under control as he punches one in the gut and barrels past him, uses the burst of adrenaline to propel him down the street, rushing madly, legs pumping, heart racing...almost there...

And then one of them snags the collar of his shirt and it feels sickeningly as if everything has started to move in slow motion: he is falling, falling, down on the ground, and then the kicks start. A foot slams into his face before he has time to move his hands to protect it, and he feels the warm, sticky blood begin to ooze out of his nose as the blows rain down, catching him in the stomach, back, crotch. He almost laughs to think that he might die like this: he would never get to write that song, or fly on an airplane, or tell Hyukjae I love you and I need you and I'm sorry, I'm so sorry.

The thought is hilarious, horrifying, completely engrossing, and so he doesn't realize at first what the muffled gasp and the sound of a body hitting the ground next to him mean, doesn't understand why the blows have stopped and someone is helping him roughly to his feet, someone—

"Yesung-ssi?"

Yesung looks poised, ready for a business meeting in his tailored black suit, but the cold anger in his voice is almost as frightening as the three men had been earlier. "Can you walk?"

"Yeah, I think—"

"There's a car around the corner back the way you came. I want you to run, get in the car and wait for me." Donghae can do nothing but stare, mouth agape, and note absently how the blood trickles over his lip and drips down onto his tongue. "Now!" Yesung yells, and shoves him forward, and then he is running, hard. He looks back only once and sees the three men back on their feet and closing in on Yesung; he faces forward and runs faster and doesn't look back again even when he hears the gunshot.

He's not sure how long he waits, sleeve held to his nose to keep the blood from dripping onto the leather seats, before Yesung slips into the back seat next to him and says cooly, "Drive." He expects Yesung to say something to him, anything, but the man stares straight forward, hands folded calmly in his lap, and suddenly Donghae can't take it anymore.

"How? How did you—why were you there?"

Yesung turns his head slowly towards him. "I've been following you for a few days, Donghae. I was told that you're seeing someone outside of work and that it's affecting your performance, and I wanted to see for myself."

Donghae can feel his heart begin race again. "Who—" he begins to ask, but realizes the answer before he can finish the question. Sungmin. "Please, sir, please, it has nothing to do with my work—"

Yesung silences him with a curt movement of his head. "Listen, Donghae, I couldn't give a fuck what or who you do when you're not at the club. That's your time. And from what I can tell, your boyfriend isn't having any effect on your work—you were just a mediocre whore to begin with." Donghae thinks faintly that he should be offended, but he finds himself nodding dumbly in agreement. "So you do whatever you want with your boyfriend, ok? On your time."

Suddenly Yesung's face is close to his and his eyes are narrowed to slits. "But if you ever sneak him into the club on my time again, what those shits did to you tonight will seem like a fucking carnival ride. And you'd better think long and hard the next time you want to be lovey-dovey in the park around a bunch of young hoods, because if someone ruins that pretty little face of yours for good I'll kick your ass out onto the streets so fast you won't know what hit you. Understood?"

"Y-yes, sir. Thank you, sir."

Yesung smiles for the first time that night and it makes Donghae shiver. "You're welcome, Donghae. Remember, I'm on your side; I'm a businessman, and any good businessman can tell you how important it is to take care of the merchandise. Driver," he says abruptly, "call the nurse and have her come to my suite." Then a real smile blooms on his face, and Donghae thinks that it's the most frightening things he's seen the whole night. "Oh, and call that henna tattoo artist, too; Donghae here is going to help me teach one of his coworkers a lesson."




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[info]wmelon_kaiye
2007-11-04 02:40 pm UTC (link)
Spot D:

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-04 02:41 pm UTC (link)
I know I've said this before, but you are SO. FAST. XD

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(no subject) - [info]wmelon_kaiye, 2007-11-04 03:31 pm UTC
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[info]xiahtic
2007-11-04 03:01 pm UTC (link)
skdjfskljfliejflfkjelfjlefdeiw YES. OMFG YES.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-04 03:04 pm UTC (link)
LOL Yay!

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[info]ayray
2007-11-04 03:15 pm UTC (link)
I've been waiting. This was SO good *Went to re-read*

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-04 03:22 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you liked it! (And sorry to keep you waiting. :-))

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(no subject) - [info]ayray, 2007-11-04 03:38 pm UTC
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[info]out_of_words24
2007-11-04 03:16 pm UTC (link)
YOU ALREADY KNOW WHAT I THINK OF THIS <3

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-04 03:22 pm UTC (link)
I DO. NOW GO MAKE THE OTP HAPPY (or, you know, torture them some more and THEN make them happy). ♥

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[info]milkchu
2007-11-04 03:26 pm UTC (link)
Wow.

I liked, a lot :D Especially the ending, great job writing :)

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-04 03:48 pm UTC (link)
Thanks; I'm glad you liked it. :-)

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[info]shienri
2007-11-04 03:35 pm UTC (link)
*FLAIL* This is like the perfectest thing to ever read before I go to bed and wake up for an exam tomorrow.

Have I ever said I love you?? Because I really do. ♥

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-04 03:48 pm UTC (link)
ilu2. Also, I love your icon; it's perfect for this. :-)

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[info]hypothesi
2007-11-04 03:43 pm UTC (link)
I've never commented on one of these before but OMGASLDKJASLCAOEIRF. I love this. :DDDD? Guh and especially "Oh, and call that henna tattoo artist, too; Donghae here is going to help me teach one of his coworkers a lesson." *glittery eyes* I LIKE. ♥

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-04 03:53 pm UTC (link)
Hooray for commenting! I'm glad you liked it; the tattoo part continues in [info]out_of_words24's Rules if you're interested.

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(no subject) - [info]hypothesi, 2007-11-04 03:58 pm UTC

[info]jaded_skys
2007-11-04 03:48 pm UTC (link)
djfahdsfjhdsjhgjdskhgjshdgjhsdjhjgkshdgka

WELL GOODMORNING!

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-04 03:53 pm UTC (link)
Really, I don't post these things specifically so that they can greet you when you wake up. I DON'T.

...or do I? ;-)

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(no subject) - [info]jaded_skys, 2007-11-05 12:45 am UTC

[info]sugarless_666
2007-11-04 05:08 pm UTC (link)
I knew Yesung was a vampire lord! And could you please make Sungmin eat strawberries? Wait, did Julia eat strawberries or is it all in my head? And what is 'tit for tat' anyway? Is it like 'eye for an eye'? I never quite grasped that expression.

Come out to the veranda with me. The view is spectacular, and I can show you how Kibum likes to be fucked while we talk.

Okay, verandas will never mean the same for me.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-04 05:17 pm UTC (link)
He...is, isn't he? Mmm...vampire!Yeh...makes me think of [info]coyotecolored's amazingness...

Anyways! I do not recall if Julia ate strawberries or not, but Sungmin should. And yes, 'tit for tat' is basically equivalent to 'an eye for an eye.' I chose it here because 'tat' can also be 'tattoo' and thus the fun double entendre.

I...was going to start the scene with them on the veranda, but then I didn't. I sort of regret it, now. ;D

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[info]0taeyang0
2007-11-04 07:43 pm UTC (link)
omgcanihaveyourbabiesD:

I LOVE YOU~~~~

This was awesome! 8D

Yehsung is SO messed up--and I love it!

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-04 08:24 pm UTC (link)
assoonasigetmymin-in-bondage:D

What? Yesung, messed up? Surely not... ;D

Glad you liked it.

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(no subject) - [info]0taeyang0, 2007-11-04 11:22 pm UTC
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[info]blessedangel13
2007-11-04 08:56 pm UTC (link)
YESUNGGGG

<33333333333

AWESOME.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-04 09:41 pm UTC (link)
That seems to be the standard reaction. ;D

Yesung: he's so hot right now.

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(no subject) - [info]blessedangel13, 2007-11-06 02:59 am UTC

[info]this_hyukjae
2007-11-04 11:40 pm UTC (link)
oh my... i really don't know what to expect...
yehsung... what do you have in stored for them?

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-04 11:54 pm UTC (link)
If I told you then it wouldn't be a secret, would it? ;-) Don't worry, though; I think we've all decided that we can't bear to see Donghae abused much longer.

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[info]tiatza
2007-11-05 12:34 am UTC (link)
this was just so good and i love the evil yehmin and guh *flails*

wait... if it's a henna, doesn't it mean it'll come off eventually? so... does that mean yeh tricked jae to scare him?

poor hae... *pets* everyone loves him but we still abuse him so...

looking back at the very beginnings of the hooker!verse, it's amazing to see how far it's come. all this spawned from just one fic. i love it.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-05 12:41 am UTC (link)
Yes! Yeh tricked Jae; he's very tricksy like that. :-)

And it is amazing, isn't it! I'm actually working on summaries of all the fics right now, and reading them again just makes me appreciate them even more.

Thanks for reading (and, of course, for your contributions as well)!

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[info]sharkbait_ha
2007-11-05 02:01 am UTC (link)
<333
lots of it.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-05 02:09 am UTC (link)
Thank you! You never can have too much <333. (^_^)v

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[info]1tokyominute
2007-11-05 05:55 am UTC (link)
Let me say this before I forget: I absolutely love your characterizations of SungMin and Yesung. Very refreshing. I'm so sick of reading about 'I-have-pink-unicorns-and-rainbows-coming-out-of-my-ass'!SungMin, and Yesung and his non-existent obsession with coffee.

But here, they're deliciously evil. They are dangerous by themselves, but put them together and they’re a force to be reckoned with. They’re cunning, and manipulative, and deceitful, and SungMin, you selfish whore, you were not supposed to tell. I can’t wait until these two turn against each other.

I love how the subplots are divvied up among the authors. And you’re the one that prods the storyline along with your plot twists. There are also a few explanations for previous mysteries, but twice as many new questions replaced those. Did Yesung use the money that Yunho gave Bora to buy the establishment? Whatever did JaeJoong do to him? And what does Eetuek think of the changes in the establishment? He’s been MIA for sometime now. Also, how can Yesung's smile be evil? >___<

Needless to say, I can't wait for the next installment.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-05 03:49 pm UTC (link)
Alright, I need to take a moment to mentally come to grips with a comment that's a.) thoughtful, b.) keenly perceptive and c.) grammatically correct.

*savors*

Ok. Hi! Thanks for your comment!

I'm so sick of reading about 'I-have-pink-unicorns-and-rainbows-coming-out-of-my-ass'!SungMin, and Yesung and his non-existent obsession with coffee.

If the internet were, in fact, a series of tubes, I would shake your hand right now. I don't know how the tyranny of the ridiculous fanon started, but I join you in your irritation with it and your desire to see its messy, untimely end. (At least the cute trope for Sungmin, while wildly overdone, has some basis in the way he presents himself/is presented; where did this "YESUNG LUVS COFFEE!!!111!" business come from? I must have missed it.)

I can’t wait until these two turn against each other.

I can't either. :D But I must admit, the idea of writing their deviousness working against each other is a little intimidating.

You bring up some excellent questions; I hope my partners-in-crime and I can provide you with satisfactory answers down the road. (Except for the one about Yesung's smile—that, clearly, is a mystery. ;D) Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy our future installments as well!

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(no subject) - [info]0taeyang0, 2007-11-06 03:46 am UTC
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[info]tongzhiai
2007-11-06 06:29 pm UTC (link)
dgfsjdgfd this gave me such an awful case of chills. Oh Yesung you're so deliciously evil. Eeegawd. And I love how Kibum's involved in Yesung/Sungmin whilst not really being involved.

Nothing intelligent to add, sorry. How does your gracious hooker!au team feel about prequel type of stuff? I would give away body parts for some more Yesung/Kibum in this 'verse. Okay, slight exaggeration but still. :P

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-07 02:01 am UTC (link)
Prequel, you say? I...am intrigued by this most excellent of ideas. I will think on it. :-)

In any event, I'm definitely planning on writing more Yesung/Kibum and in the process revealing more about their past, so don't worry on that front.

Thanks for reading!

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[info]kelseypaige
2007-11-12 08:24 pm UTC (link)
oh chris. for some strange reason i was just going through all your stuff and rereading them for no apparent reason, but this fic still owns my soul. ;_; i'm not going to even not-cry, because this deserves ALL MY TEARZ.

or tell Hyukjae I love you and I need you and I'm sorry, I'm so sorry.

you need to continue this NAO. >:o before i die of dehydration.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-11-12 10:20 pm UTC (link)
Yes'm! I...will write more hooker!fic. Soon. I just need to finish this wacky Junsu/BoA thing first... (Oh, and write those research proposals, and read that Marxist analysis, and make a Japanese news presentation...DAMN YOU SKOOL!!!!!!)

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[info]blurmeese
2008-01-05 11:14 am UTC (link)
YESUNG. *paws at screen* Love the mood in this one, with everything going over to Yesung and this:

"Whores keep each other's secrets," Sungmin says severely, and Yesung is ready to be surprised and disappointed until he continues. "So we can put them to good use at times like this. I'll tell you whatever you want to know about the club."

XD Aish. *bows to you*

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[info]halcyon_morn
2008-01-05 04:13 pm UTC (link)
LOL Yesung makes me paw at the screen too. And Sungmin makes me cackle insanely as I write him. ...TMI? XD

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[info]anthropopathy
2009-05-27 07:00 pm UTC (link)
Poor Donghae D:

I love love love your Sungmin, though! ♥

Reading mooooore.

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